The air felt the same
back when we experienced the hurricane
the memories are so vivid of that terrible day
our house a boat between the ocean and bay
darkness surrounded us
as we witnessed nature's fury
alone to fend for ourselves
it was quite a story
that still brings tears to my eyes
because truth floated to the surface
after the drowning of all the lies
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
A poem most definitely with meter that seems to have suffered the test of love? There is a deep ness to this poem, great style! !
Yes, my friend, it was definitely a life changing event. You get to know who is really there for you. Thank you for commenting. It's been on my mind a bit much this year.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A potent hurricane, a life threatening and changing event, a political statement. You are correct truth will float to the surface. It is a shame it has to take this form. The Captain believes it is time for a mutiny.
The captain is right! A mutany is a good insight! The princess has awaken and the mutany is in the making. Thank you for your comments and encouranging advice!