Who Will? Poem by Aqua Flower

Who Will?

Rating: 4.4

Who will give me good night kisses
now that we are through
Who will text me in the night
now that there is no more you
Who will greet me to my day
with a text and a picture too
Who will fill my empty heart
now that there is no more you

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, July 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 July 2018

sad I feel its more his loss than yours move on the world has 7.5 billions

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 January 2019

What a lovely poem of love and loss. A great write that most of us could relate to. Very touching.

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Aqua Flower 05 January 2019

Thank you dear poetess for reading and commenting. I'm happy my poems are relatable. :)

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Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2018

Missing a loved one, feeling it and expressing the feelings, not so easy, but Aqua Flower manages it like a flower.

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Aqua Flower 22 November 2018

Flower power! Yes it is true!

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Hi Flower, My poem- A Fallen Tree asks some of the same question. I wrote it after my mother died in her honor so this poem takes me a long way back and it resonates with a very challenging period of my life... Things do get better not because of time but because we choose to do better. Blessings!

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Aqua Flower 21 August 2018

So sweet of a response and thank you for reading it! I will look at your poem this week and read it! Thank you for reading and for the blessings. And I agree our mind can be more powerful than time.

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Leaping in the lane of Lonliness and loss with quintessential questions that stings and yet soothes the heart. Well done my friend!

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Bill Cantrell 02 August 2018

Love and kisses will turn up when most unexpected, and that is when they are the sweetest! Wonderful emotion full of heart! !

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Aqua Flower 02 August 2018

What a sweet comment! Thank you! Love works in mysterious ways!

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