Who Will? Poem by Aqua Flower
Who Will?
Who will give me good night kisses
now that we are through
Who will text me in the night
now that there is no more you
Who will greet me to my day
with a text and a picture too
Who will fill my empty heart
now that there is no more you
copyright @ Aqua Flower
The loss of the small things in a relationship can hurt the most. Really good poem. A 10.
**** four stars ;) Now I may/might read A Fallen Tree by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon. See his comment below. : )
AF, 'Who will greet me to my day'..........I'd use 'welcome me', not 'greet me', sister. I say it is more grammatically correct PLUS you get an alliteration, 'will welcome'.
What a lovely poem of love and loss. A great write that most of us could relate to. Very touching.
Thank you dear poetess for reading and commenting. I'm happy my poems are relatable. :)
Missing a loved one, feeling it and expressing the feelings, not so easy, but Aqua Flower manages it like a flower.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 8:51:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
sad I feel its more his loss than yours move on the world has 7.5 billions
Awe thank you! I like to think so! thanks for commenting.