The Light In My Dream That Died Poem by Aqua Flower

The Light In My Dream That Died

Rating: 5.0


Let me grieve
this loss
this light of my dream
how can something so beautiful
cause so much sorrow
our yesterdays are gone
and that dream today
drifted away
I will not have the same dream tomorrow
let the residue of that essence disappear
you are no longer here
the air that use to bring me life
was poisoned by your words
words that cut like a knife
let me grieve this dream that died
and swallow the truth
that it was all a lie

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
series of Lion & Tigress

Tuesday, October 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fake love,grief ,loss,mourning,sad love,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 29 October 2019

An elegant sob of truth, feeling, sadness and despondency. A truly painful but elegantly written, very touching work.

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C F 29 October 2019

Written with elegance and acceptance... your presence and sadness are felt across throughout the poem.10+

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Savita Tyagi 30 October 2019

Sadly not all dreams come true. But on the demise of old new dreams are born. A very well expressed poem of life's sad and bitter losses.

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Aqua Flower 06 November 2019

Looking for a new dream. When you lose hope of a dream that will never come true, it's hard to let go. But life is full of so much that we can look to fill the void with a new dream.

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Carl Roussell 30 October 2019

False love - pain and disillusionment expressed so well in your poem.

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Aqua Flower 03 November 2019

Sometimes after pain comes a new horizon. It was time to let go of something that was nothing.

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 October 2019

Such a sorrowful piece but beautifully constructed and totally engaging for the reader..I enjoyed this immensly! Lodigiana x

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Aqua Flower 10 November 2019

So happy you this poem touch you and your comment is very much appreciated.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2019

A well crafted poetic expression.....10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 October 2019

let me grieve this dream that died and swallow the truth that it was all a lie/// greatly penned let the bitter truth come and let it hug entirely to kiss the lips of immortality.....///

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