Behind her eyes
does she cry
is her heart now made of stone
feeling abandoned and alone
does she cry
does she feel
does she hide and conceal
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So much is there at the back of her eyes! A terrific poem.
Such a nice poem, Aqua Flower. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
As two of the readers have already said in their comments, eyes are indeed the windows of the soul. The poem evokes poignant feelings in the readers' mind. Reading your poem after a long time. Shall try and catch up with some more that I missed.
Thank you Khairul for reading my poems again. Love poems don't flow from this pen so much anymore, I guess Aqua Flower doesn't feel it the same way in her heart. This poem was inspired by my daughter...that iis her in the picture. :)
So glad I way going through your poems and seen this jewel! The eyes to me are the gateway to the soul, I have so missed your poetry, so many times I have went through a ton of posts to see if you have written anything...please don’t ever stop writing, you have admirers that long for your special touch with poetry, I know I am certainly one of them
Awe thank you...you always have a way of making someone feel special. Your comment is so appreciated. The picture in this poem is my daughter. My father had the same blue eyes...unfortunately that did not get passed along to me. Thank you for reading my poetry.
Maybe one day the stone will beat again, answering it's own questions. A 10!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very poignant and probing. At times, human nature can be so enigmatic. Thanks for sharing..
Thank you Rajnish for your comments on this poem. You are right, relationships and human nature can be enigmatic at times.