Behind Her Eyes Poem by Aqua Flower

Behind Her Eyes

Rating: 4.9


Behind her eyes
does she cry
is her heart now made of stone
feeling abandoned and alone
does she cry
does she feel
does she hide and conceal

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Picture copyright by Aqua Flower

Behind Her Eyes
Tuesday, February 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 18 February 2020

Very poignant and probing. At times, human nature can be so enigmatic. Thanks for sharing..

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Aqua Flower 25 February 2020

Thank you Rajnish for your comments on this poem. You are right, relationships and human nature can be enigmatic at times.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 February 2020

Such a nice poem, Aqua Flower. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 February 2020

As two of the readers have already said in their comments, eyes are indeed the windows of the soul. The poem evokes poignant feelings in the readers' mind. Reading your poem after a long time. Shall try and catch up with some more that I missed.

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Aqua Flower 05 March 2020

Thank you Khairul for reading my poems again. Love poems don't flow from this pen so much anymore, I guess Aqua Flower doesn't feel it the same way in her heart. This poem was inspired by my daughter...that iis her in the picture. :)

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Bill Cantrell 22 February 2020

So glad I way going through your poems and seen this jewel! The eyes to me are the gateway to the soul, I have so missed your poetry, so many times I have went through a ton of posts to see if you have written anything...please don’t ever stop writing, you have admirers that long for your special touch with poetry, I know I am certainly one of them

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Aqua Flower 25 February 2020

Awe thank you...you always have a way of making someone feel special. Your comment is so appreciated. The picture in this poem is my daughter. My father had the same blue eyes...unfortunately that did not get passed along to me. Thank you for reading my poetry.

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Carl Roussell 20 February 2020

Maybe one day the stone will beat again, answering it's own questions. A 10!

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Kostas Lagos 18 February 2020

I love this playful writing! Excellent!

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