Mihaela Pirjol


Hypnopompia (Senryu) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

slow, lethargic birth
from the uterus of dreams —
Morning's greeting life

Topic(s) of this poem: awakening, dream, sleep

Form: Senryu


Comments about Hypnopompia (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Terry Craddock (1/26/2016 4:45:00 PM)


    Pregnant In Thoughts Limitless

    floating in a uterus of dreams...

    explains why poets may wake
    pregnant in thoughts as limitless

    as sands upon miles of seashore...


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Hypnopompia' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/1/2016 10:44:00 PM)


    'uterus of dreams'

    explains why poets may wake pregnant in thoughts as limitless as sands upon miles of seashore, love the imagery
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  • Unwritten Soul (12/12/2015 3:02:00 AM)


    There is a story between your words, that lies detail between those fewer words..nice write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, January 27, 2017


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