Joshua Fegley

Rookie - 5 Points (Just another dying day... / I'm fading away)

Goodbye...My Love - Poem by Joshua Fegley

I put the shotgun to my head,
a fraction from now I'll be dead.
An ounce of lead pierces into my head,
cerebrial fluid starts to spread.
A life of woe I have led...
Oh how much I have bled.
My body twitches on the bed,
seconds later I'm officially dead.
Well I guess enough has been said;
this poem is covered in fragments from my head.


Comments about Goodbye...My Love by Joshua Fegley

  • (2/11/2007 5:16:00 PM)

    i love this poem its great i can really relate to it... its so deep and it captures the reader.. even for people that have no intrest in poetry if they read this poem they feel lyk there thier this peom is very kool and i like it alot! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2006 9:46:00 PM)

    love the last line adds depth. not that it needed depth or anything i just like it.
    Great poem.
    Lylyanna
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  • (12/21/2006 3:54:00 PM)

    wow thats sad thank s for the comment (Report)Reply

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  • (12/10/2006 4:47:00 PM)

    Its very sad, but also very good. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/23/2006 12:34:00 PM)

    lovely, now who's gonna clear up the mess, your Mum? (Report)Reply

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  • (10/20/2006 3:01:00 PM)

    I love this poem, it's really good!

    Alisha
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  • (10/14/2006 10:55:00 PM)

    i love the direct style of this poem, good work. Holly xox (Report)Reply

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  • (10/13/2006 9:55:00 PM)

    Nice poem Joshua! ; D i liked it alot! check out mine sometime! ! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 16, 2010


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