I Am Holding Your Eyes Hostage Poem by Wanda Swim Strunk

I Am Holding Your Eyes Hostage

Rating: 4.5


I am
Holding your eyes
Hostage
But
Your Mind
is free
to
wander

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 13 September 2005

VERY GOOD, ..............

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Lylyanna Pilewski 13 September 2005

lol nice i like it! Lylyanna

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 13 September 2005

short, simple and very much to the point... nice one -Eila

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 14 September 2005

so succinct yet mischievously clever! i love it! Jake

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S. Wesley Mcgranor 16 February 2021

You said it.

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Peter Lebuhn 12 December 2005

Nice beginning I would like to see more of this in detail Tell me more about the eyes; Why is the others persons mind wandering where does it go.

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Keiah Delu 20 November 2005

I am lost for words...good job!

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Joy Vanderhelm 13 November 2005

I like how simply you tell it. Hail to the power of persuasion!

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Mary Nagy 31 October 2005

I really like your style Wanda. Very nice. sincerely, mary

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