Im not a poet
thats my life so i wrote it
so everyone will know it
when i die they can show it
I never was a poet
just a kid with a pen
trying to relate
tryna find a friend
from within
never loved my self
always thought i needed wealth
always shy before the eyes
of one those who judge everyone else.
Now i write for the bite
hopefully it hurts your ears
maybe you will realize
just what you did through all the years
the suppression
taught me volume
and the violence
taught me the aggression
you have created a monster
now it time YOU learned a lesson
NoW i could care less
what you think
i burned the test
sitting at my desk
like
what?
wheres the rest?
Now i write for the bite hopefully it hurts your ears maybe you will realize just what you did through all the years the suppression taught me volume and the violence taught me the aggression you have created a monster now it time YOU learned a lesson it has real meaning behind it, its serious and thoughtful in a tone.. you used some masculine rhyme cool.
i like how it rhymes in a really aggressive way. i really connected with it! great job! :)
What you write is exactly how I feel. I write my life so when I'm gone at least a few people will know what I felt and what I've been through. You are a wonderful writer and person!
The truth is in your words. You are not a poet, yet; but you have the potential to be a very good one. Keep up the good work. Irene
Read a lot of yo poems... i see a true talent and artist here
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awh, i like it. Its really nice (: