I Am Supreme Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Am Supreme

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I am the soul,
I am immortal,
But I am dependent on a mortal body,
Whenever I wish to do something,
I have to use my hands,
Whenever I want to look at something,
I have to use my eyes,
Whenever I want to smell something,
I have to use my nose,
Whenever I want to listen to,
I have to use my ears,
Whenever I want to think,
I have to use my brain,
All these are electromagnetic impulses,
These impulses touch me,
And I rebound it to the body,
The body then feels pleasures and pains,
That is why I created mirrors,
These mirrors reflect my virtual image,
Immortality depends on the mortality.

Thursday, June 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 15 January 2017

The co-ordination between body and the soul- one mortal and another immortal. An age-old philosophy presented in a brand new format. Thanks Akhtar Jawad Sahab. I quote: But I am dependent on a mortal body, Immortality depends on the mortality.

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2015

Atma Parmatma ka ansh hai. I often think about our ancestor including you how they have discussed vividly on soul without which a giantic body is dead. Beautiful and great job sir.

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Valsa George 13 June 2015

Yes, immortality can be achieved only through mortality! Till immortality is gained, the soul has to be bound to the body! Quite philosophic!

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Khalid Saifullah 11 June 2015

A philosophic view of soul and body.......................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2015

These mirrors reflect my virtual image, Immortality depends on the mortality. ........yes, it is true. Soul is immortal and it always depends upon the mortal body. A beautiful spiritual poem nicely presented. Simple and attractive phraseology. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting......10

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