I And We Poem by Bharati Nayak

I And We

Rating: 5.0


I and We


My family
Makes me
From I to We
I am a part of my family
A continuation of heritage
A descendant from gracious parents
Inheriting qualities of my ancestors.

I am connected
To other members by blood
And also by love

I extend from one to many
When I tied a knot and
Became a unit of another family.

‘Family' is a whole
So long as love binds them all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 March 2022

(cont.) ...use 'extended' to match verb tense of 'tried'. : ) bri

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Kim Barney 06 March 2022

Five stars, Bharati. Family is everything.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 March 2022

Very nice write about a family. Simple and beautiful.

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Bharati Nayak 07 March 2022

Thank you all the poets who have read and appreciated the poem.For me family is our first school from which we learn to love, to help one another, learn our language and many social behaviours.

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Bharati Nayak 07 March 2022

(Cotd) Family gives us a sense of belonging.In family we do not only care for ourselves, but also care for other members of the family.

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Soran M. H 14 April 2022

be proud for this great feeling and nice opportunity that you descendant from gracious parents

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Soran M. H 14 April 2022

A descendant from gracious parents Inheriting qualities of my ancestors.

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Susan Williams 02 April 2022

Thank you for posting this--the world needs to sit back and reflect on family and all the ties it spreads from country to country and age to age and is the warf and weave of history---well done! 5 stars and faving this

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Nabakishore Dash 08 March 2022

Very lovely poem Madam Nayak.

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