I Brushed Off Your Shadow Poem by Hebert Logerie
I Brushed Off Your Shadow
My eyes were wide open
Babe, when I brushed off your shadow
In my dark room
I had the thrill and the chill, and my limbs
Have vibrated as if the earth
Was flickering subtly.
Your perfume was on my pillows
Your silent voice was whistling
And disturbing the peace
Which existed in my thoughts
Your spirit was, with me, present
Yes, I touched your shadow by accident.
Copyright © February 2019, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poems.
Forgot to mention: Congrats on having it chosen as member poem of the day!
What an interesting concept, to brush off a shadow! As the poetess said, you have a great imagination! Thanks for posting.
The expression of this poem is so enchanting. It would be better to have the juxtaposition of the original poem by J'ai Effleure Ton Ombre. Thank you both and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of POD.
Your perfume was on my pillows Your silent voice was whistling And disturbing the peace Which existed in my thoughts Your spirit was, with me, present- - - touching your shadow. wonderful imagination. tony
I have read this poem in French, it sounds more beautiful! Ta voix calme siffla Et a perturbé la paix Il existait au creux de mon esprit Tes pensées étaient avec moi Oui, j'ai accidentellement touché ton ombre. Je peux seulement dire: À couper le souffle! ...................A 10=+++++++ for the scintillating poem.CONGRATS for the MPOTD!
What a thrilling poem! Congrats on being poet of the day! You deserve it.
A sweet love poem. Great imagery. Love is sublime and divine and world needs this so much now. Congrats.
The world is full of love and this love poem is so beautiful
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12/6/2025 12:44:27 PM # 1.0.0
Highly imaginative poem, Hebert. Enjoyed immensely!