Peripheral Beauty Poem by Hebert Logerie

Peripheral Beauty

Rating: 4.6

The train was zooming by,
When I saw her like a veil in the sky…

She was strolling in the street;
She was immaculately neat.
It was like a dream;
I wanted to scream:
Oh! God, Oh! Beauty,
I just peripherally
Saw the most beautiful woman
On earth! She was way gorgeous than an omen,
And prettier than an April bouquet of flowers;
She smiled and laughed like no other creatures.

What a Joy! What a Beauty!
What a treat,
To have mnemonically photographed such a woman,
Who smiled like a Baby,
And who educed a warm dropp of rain
From my right eye,
Which caused my heart to beat
So profusely and to switch side,
And my spleen to quiver,
And my soul to beg and twitter.

Oh! God, this one had no flaws,
No scars, no thorns, and no claws;
No tattoos, no chains, and no rings.
Her hair was her wings;
She swam through the clouds like a proud swan,
Like a mermaid in the deep blue ocean.

Rayan Ali 28 September 2009

beautifully described in all ways! a great poem

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Laila Layla 28 September 2009

Detailed description of amazing creature in your point of view. the way you described, showed how you admire her. with your so nice chosen words, very interesting. Wish to share how to write a better poem as you do. Thanks

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 September 2009

I enjoyed reading this, amazing poem..10

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 24 September 2009

your Imagination is working very well/ what a beautiful Description! ! ! Thanks For Sharing!

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Rebecca Harvey 24 September 2009

this poem is amazing it is wrote so nicely it is simply amazing you described how two people meet and there souls instantly connect and they are soul mates for life love to see more poems from you thank you for the invatation

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2015

A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOR EVER - John Keats. I like your style of written, you captured the beauty of your subject very well. A lovely romantic poem subtly penned. Thanks for sharing and remain blessed.

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‘Peripheral became Central …poetically culminated into Eternal’...envy your 'Lady Luck' Sir lolol Excellent diction Sir Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Cordially invite to my page and grace by yopur comments if you please…Sir n

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Kari Alexander 10 February 2010

words as beautiful as the inspiration must have been, wonderful piece!

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Alandra Moreira 11 October 2009

wow... breathtaking she was a beautiful lady.

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Emu Getachew 30 September 2009

Peripheral Beauty...If you can capture this much beauty with your peripheral vision i just simply wonder if beauty is really a language of vision.I loved your words arrangement with each line.10++++

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