Rudy Hossam

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I Can'T Be For You... - Poem by Rudy Hossam

Alone I sit...
Alone I think...
Of everything you made...
Of every word you said...

Could this really be true...
Or am I living an illusion so true...
He said what I dreamed he would say...
I heard it and wished I could stay...

But...My face turned red...
My eyes filled with tears...
How can I tell you...
That I can't be for you...

I know that's what i wanted to hear...
I know that I've been waiting for it for years...
And when u said it...
It sounded so great...
It was better then I ever dreamed...

I never wanted to hurt u with me...
I just wanted to be for you...
But life doesn't always serve your wants...
Life is cruel...
It won't leave me with you...


Comments about I Can'T Be For You... by Rudy Hossam

  • Merna Ibrahim (6/26/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    so touching and so painful....I see an obvious message in this poem and I agree with you in this message that the life is PERFIDIOUS.....well written.Merna Ibrahim. (Report)Reply

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  • Muhammad Ali (2/5/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    yes. this is life SIMPLY. and just the simplest way to reflect ur thoughts is great. this is a great poem because it is so simple to read so deep invision! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Samweli Butobi (2/3/2009 5:53:00 AM)

    emotionally written, love poem, keep up I wanna read more (Report)Reply

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  • Jihad TJihad T (1/16/2009 2:24:00 PM)

    good wording
    but it seems to me like a letter
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  • sumaira .....ir (1/16/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    Wow! True dear lov u for this poem (Report)Reply

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  • XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! (12/31/2008 3:33:00 PM)

    very beautiful and lovely poem and nice words to go with it (Report)Reply

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  • Akram Awadat (12/31/2008 2:13:00 PM)

    very beautiful poem
    nice words go on
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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (10/14/2008 2:54:00 PM)

    i gree with you(But life doesn't always serve your wants) lovely peom wish you all the best (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 7, 2009


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