I Can'T Be For You... Poem by Rudy Hossam

I Can'T Be For You...

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Alone I sit...
Alone I think...
Of everything you made...
Of every word you said...

Could this really be true...
Or am I living an illusion so true...
He said what I dreamed he would say...
I heard it and wished I could stay...

But...My face turned red...
My eyes filled with tears...
How can I tell you...
That I can't be for you...

I know that's what i wanted to hear...
I know that I've been waiting for it for years...
And when u said it...
It sounded so great...
It was better then I ever dreamed...

I never wanted to hurt u with me...
I just wanted to be for you...
But life doesn't always serve your wants...
Life is cruel...
It won't leave me with you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 14 October 2008

i gree with you(But life doesn't always serve your wants) lovely peom wish you all the best

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Akram Awadat 31 December 2008

very beautiful poem nice words go on

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

very beautiful and lovely poem and nice words to go with it

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Merna Ibrahim 26 June 2009

so touching and so painful....I see an obvious message in this poem and I agree with you in this message that the life is PERFIDIOUS.....well written.Merna Ibrahim.

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Muhammad Ali 05 February 2009

yes. this is life SIMPLY. and just the simplest way to reflect ur thoughts is great. this is a great poem because it is so simple to read so deep invision! ! !

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Samweli Butobi 03 February 2009

emotionally written, love poem, keep up I wanna read more

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Jihad T 16 January 2009

good wording but it seems to me like a letter

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sumaira .....ir 16 January 2009

Wow! True dear lov u for this poem

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Rudy Hossam

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