Rudy Hossam

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A Complicated Feeling... - Poem by Rudy Hossam

I said I'll write...
And for the first time...
I couldn't think of words to say...
I couldn't find something to help...

I felt a feeling...
I couldn't express...
It hurts...but it's great...
It's painful...but it's worth it...

Every word I think of...
Just about to put it down...
It's total opposite...
Comes by my mind....
I find it also fit to use...

The feeling is complicated...
More than I thought...

I feel alone...though accompanied...
I feel accompanied...though alone...

It makes me cry...but I know I'm glad...
It makes me laugh...but I know I'm sad...

It makes me strong...when actually I'm weak...
It makes me weak...when actually I'm strong...

I feel my heart bleeding from no wound...
I feel my heart dancing from a great cut...

I know you think I'm crazy....
And here is another thing...I'M NOT...

If I were crazy...I wouldn't mind...
At lest I'd know...why I feel so UNKNOWN...


Comments about A Complicated Feeling... by Rudy Hossam

  • Merna Ibrahim (6/26/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    Great poem, , , the contrasts in this poem really emphasis the meaning....10/10.
    keep it up.....
    Merna Ibrahim.
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  • Muhammad Ali (1/31/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    o, there comes moments, when we need these words. thanks that ou pleased us. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarah AbdullahSarah Abdullah (1/28/2009 1:08:00 PM)

    I said I'll write...
    And for the first time...
    I couldn't think of words to say...
    I couldn't find something to help...

    Simply love it....
    It totaly express poetry writing...
    GREAT...well done
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  • Debbie Kean (1/18/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    Yes, it's cute...
    Deb
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  • Jihad TJihad T (1/16/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    it's cute
    keep it up
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  • sumaira .....ir (1/16/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    Cute dear! It shows your teen age feeling (Report)Reply

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  • Akram Awadat (1/14/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    very nice poem
    thanks a lot
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  • XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! (12/31/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    this, to me a really great poem that a lot of people can relate to 10++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (12/31/2008 9:35:00 AM)

    Pairs of opposites lead to complicated feeling and confusion-the situation is well composed as a poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Sonny Rainshine (12/31/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    Nicely composed poem about the complexity of emotions. Everything has its opposites-there are some scientists who think there are parallel universes in which everything that happens to us happens exactly the opposite way. Good work. (Report)Reply

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  • Amal Mara''beh (12/31/2008 8:38:00 AM)

    Rudy Dear, sometimes i have the same feeling thats why i can understand you. you know maybe we feel that we are lost sweat-heart. nice poem.....keep writing because you have the talent. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, November 7, 2008


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