*~* I Can'T Get Over You *~* Poem by Thad Wilk

*~* I Can'T Get Over You *~*

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The slightest thing it seems will bring, me
back to happier days. To the time when you
were once mine, until we parted ways.
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No more do we walk hand in hand. On moonlit
nights across the sand. The moon now hides
behind black clouds. I stand alone beneath
these shrouds.
~
The stars above, now no longer twinkle the way
they used to do. All I can say is I miss you each
day. I love you still and I always will
'' I can't get over you ''.
~
I pray the day will come. Our love we shall renew.
That you'll be back and then. Unlike the past
this time it will last. For broken hearts can mend.
~
Oh our love then would be a symphony. That we
could hear each day. This music of love 'twould
never end. For it's meant to be it's ''my destiny''.
To hold you in my arms again.

I hope one day you will feel the same way and
realize you love me too. Until the day you come
back to stay - I can't get over you...

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 November 2008

A sad one mate, hope it's not true my friend... Andy 10

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Tia Maria 28 November 2008

ouch... I feeeeel the pain... what love does to us hey - well, on the bright side at least we know we still have loving hearts. Imagine not feeling anything at all. Best wishes, T

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Lynda Robson 27 November 2008

This is so sad Thad, its hard to move on sometimes, hope you can mend your broken heart, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

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Tsira Goge 01 January 2009

It is sad but fine poems simultaneously... Have hope.... - who knocks, for them always opens doors.... 10x10 .... Happy New Year, Thad, Tsira

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Mamta Agarwal 10 December 2008

break ups are painful- universal feeling, yet hope keeps us going- very sad, moving and well expressed.10 Mamta

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Indira Babbellapati 29 November 2008

notwithstanding the parting, the poem reveberates with hope...that's how it should be!

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Duncan Wyllie 29 November 2008

This poem shows full feeling/ expression Well done again Thad Love duncan X

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Andrew Blakemore 28 November 2008

You have truly captured the sad feeling of loss in this poem Thad. A very fine work indeed. Best wishes, Andrew

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