I Can'T Stop..... Poem by Surayya Abbas

I Can'T Stop.....

Rating: 4.5


I can't stop
The sunlight
Peeping through the window
Of my bedside.
I can't stop
The rain
When it starts
To drain all my pain.
I can't stop
The tears
Of someone
Shivering with fears.
I can't stop
The amusing style
Of children
When they give smiles.
I can't stop
The dried leaves
Falling from the trees.
I can't stop
The brightness of
Moonlight
In lonely nights.
I can't stop
The sights
Waving in my eyes.
I can't stop
Myself
When it comes to write a poem.





4/8/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 18 April 2009

It is death........ that can stop all this! ! ! ! ! ! ! when we are alive! ! ! ! ! we can't stop soft and clear and poetic flow too superb! !

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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

Don't stop writing poetry, everything changes given time except our ability to be creative, you do it so beautifully so please don't stop.

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ata khan 10 April 2009

Yes, One can't stop and as a matter of fact can't start writing as well It comes by itself Beautiful flow 10

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Sandra Fowler 09 April 2009

Very nicely written. I hope you will not stop writing poems for the rest of your life. Take care. Kind regrads, Sandra

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Saadat Tahir 08 April 2009

simple ideas put in a beautiful string of words...liked it great job...keep penning

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Reihaneh Jalalian 01 July 2009

gread job dear. wonderful poem, beautifully written.10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

'I can't stop Myself When it comes to write a poem.' A lovely poem that flows like a cool river. And finally you have concluded nicely. 10+++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

yeah very true... the things related to nature can't be stop or changed... but being a poet when you see, you feel and bring into vreses as you said..wonderful poem and enjoyed a lot... hope you never stop writing... I am a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and soon the 7th one on my thoughts will be published in Canada by my poetry friends... any way this poem got 10 +++ points

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

very nice poem thanx

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

finely done my friend.. great works u are amazing

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