how sweet your kiss is..
how tender your touch is..
how warm your hug is..
how soft your voice is..
how shinny your smile is..
how delicate your body is..
how dark your hair is..
& i can't tell you how much you mean everything to me! !
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young man.love has struck you. this is a fine feeling inlove voted10 surya
nice love poem...well expressed thoughts about the magic of love!
What a lovely poem. i liked how you contradicted yourself. it made it more poetic.
Aw! This reminds me of my dad except for the kiss part and the dark hair part (it's practically all grey, but don't tell him I said that: D) . But other than that it's exactly how I feel about him. Wish I'd written this.: -) Great poem!
What a lovely poem. I agree, youre obviously in love and unable to express your feelings for some reason. I vote that you tell her :) thank you for sharing with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
short but a very sweet poem! I liked it. Keep up writing