I Cannot Stop A Wandering Cloud Or A Rising Kite Poem by nimal dunuhinga

I Cannot Stop A Wandering Cloud Or A Rising Kite

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Why should I try?
It has its own destiny
And let wind takes the responsibility.
I am just a stargazer in the open sky.
When my kite insists about the freedom of choice
No grumble and I let loose the line to choose her the side.

Friday, June 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,freedom,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 June 2009

.... and in this acceptance lies spiritual and personal freedom. You dress your wisdom in well cut garments, Nimal. I love this one. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 05 June 2009

We are indeed too finite to control destiny. I can see your wandering cloud and your rising kite.Pleasing imagery. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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