I Don'T Know Poem by Jinal Oswal

I Don'T Know

I don’t know how the things go wrong,
When my intentions are meant to be right..
I don’t know how I make someone feel bad,
When I want them to feel good..

I don’t know how people find me offending,
When I am just defending..
I don’t know why people cultivate hatred in their hearts,
When all I want is some love so they never be apart..

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Bernard Snyder 19 October 2011

This is a good 'question! None of us knows Jinal. Very nicely written. Thank you so much for sharing such fine work!

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Stefanie Fontker 19 October 2011

I've been here too many times. I think I've said something, but the message is lost in translation. Great poetry, I love this.

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2011

Sometimes our deeds hurt someone but we are not doing anything deliberately.. and what went wrong though..I've felt this feeling so many times in my life...but keep the goodness in us and don't hear what the world around us says..it's a nice poem and you written it so well!

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Unwritten Soul 18 October 2011

I know this feeling..i know it really well...yeah sometimes we only doing for the best but we taken as giving sour...it bitter to us as return right. But move the right thing if you think it's good...You dont know and i also dont know why sometimes we unintentionally said to hurt people while we doesnt even know what we have done, coz we never meant to do that, in fact wish them for best....keep good deed though :) _Unwritten Soul

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