Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 190,252 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

I Feel Your Deep Love - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear father of heaven you are
I feel your deep love sure
In purity you write love life
I surrender in you every second.

Precious your love sings in heart
You do nice art at morning
Birds chirp in deep love for you
I learn this art sure in day.

Every minute in meditation I feel
You write new light to teach us
Learning and perception matter
I realize self everyday sure.

You are great father ocean light
Your love makes me very deep lover
Deep love is light and wisdom
I promise to be with you in way.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, morning, spiritual


Comments about I Feel Your Deep Love by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 8:38:00 PM)

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    picture of Ramin Ara
    xGreat write dear Kumarmani.
    10 Nov 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Sylvia Frances Chan
    xThis is a deep feeling for the Father and a true acknowledgment that He is the All above all creatures. A deep awakaning is present here on this very morning through meditation and saying prayers to Him. So grateful is your heart as I can read, see and witness through your divine poetry. Thank you for sharing your deep thoughts. A magnificent poem for sure.
    10 Nov 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

    picture of Rohan *******
    xa wonderful poem dear Sir...
    10 Nov 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply

    picture of Dr.subhendu kar
    xprofoundly intense seeking God of love pattern fleshes out to know and knowing yet His light of love splashes on us to see and fill rebounces to feel love of god yet within, beautifully crafted blazing glory of God, thanks for sharing
    10 Nov 2015 by Dr.subhendu kar | Reply

    picture of Meggie Gultiano
    xyour lines are written from the heart and you are very humble, acknowledging Somebody above, that without HIM, you are nothing.A good read
    10 Nov 2015 by Meggie Gultiano | Reply

    picture of Jarid...
    xBeautifully written coming from a humble heart. This is an inspiration.
    10 Nov 2015 by Jarid... | Reply

    picture of Dorothy A. Holmes
    xA most special verse, filled with love and appreciation for the blessings given by our heavenly father. A most enjoyable read! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
    10 Nov 2015 by Dorothy A. Holmes | Reply

    picture of Candy Barr
    xA poem with much passion for our Father!
    11 Nov 2015 by Candy Barr | Reply

    picture of Elena S(*_*)
    xDeep love is light and wisdom beautiful expressed, thank you for sharing.
    12 Nov 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

    picture of Elizabeth Squires
    xA beautifully composed piece my friend. Thanks for sharing.
    12 Nov 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply

    picture of Lynda Robson
    xA passionate write, well composed
    12 Nov 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply

    picture of Nishu Mathur
    xA beautiful poem of faith.
    13 Nov 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xBeautiful ink my dear friend xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo tfs blessings
    13 Nov 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

    picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt
    xNicely posed and thought-provoking. Enjoyed.
    14 Nov 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

    picture of words....
    xPens like a prayer that we all can relate to well written my friend :)
    14 Nov 2015 by words.... | Reply

    picture of Shalini ~The solitary star
    xWell composed.
    16 Nov 2015 by Shalini ~The solitary star | Reply

    picture of Mizzy..
    xA lovely poem of deep devotion to one that is above all. Inspiring read this morning!
    17 Nov 2015 by Mizzy.. | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xI just love this poem, really truly brings me to; ** tears ty so much for your wonderful poems full of love towards our creator our God blessings my dear friend XOXOXO XOXOXO XOXOXO HUGS
    17 Nov 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

    picture of robyn selters
    xmoving poem... your shining appreciation is evident, your love of the Creator of such beautiful mornings and bird-song too... delightful and uplifting poem... tfs
    25 Nov 2015 by robyn selters | Reply
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  • Liza Sudina (11/11/2015 4:23:00 AM)


    You are enlightened by meditation!
    yesterday I read Sri Aurobindo poems. there he writes that Rakshasa - is Ego, then Asura is Ego. How many egos are there?
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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (11/10/2015 3:14:00 AM)


    Loved this poem on the Universal Father and Love. Thanks. (10) (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/9/2015 7:39:00 PM)


    'You are great father ocean light
    Your love makes me very deep lover
    Deep love is light and wisdom
    I promise to be with you in way.'

    True lines.. Having the right kind of faith and beliefs can take us a long way.. Towards the 'moksha' away from the claws of the 'maya'... The devotional aspect in this poem is really touching and a good poem to start the day with. Touched me even though I am not a great deal of a religious person.. Thank you for sharing..10 :)
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, November 9, 2015


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