I Follow You! Poem by Luwi Habte

I Follow You!

Rating: 5.0


Earth shares the same for all
But time gets worst to the hell
Love became smaller than money
And people have made it funny
They play with hearts
They buy love
And even, they never care
If some one has angelic behavior
But I am different then all
And respect words
And give meanings to words
As you do
I am the same path on you.

You are my ideal poet dear Afzal, keep on writing because you are ever best writer

Dedicated to my poet friend Afzal Shauq

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 December 2009

‘…They buy love…'....rightly penned lucre is all that is needed for love …but never Love [uppercase L] Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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They play with hearts They buy love And even, they never care If some one has angelic behavior But I am different then all it has become show business now andno one has time to think aabout all. all wants win the race inno time.....lovley write

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A T 11 July 2009

VERY nice its very caring of you to honor another poet in such a good way... i really like how you seem so caring and so aware of others and not just yourself

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

A nice honor to Afzal, thanks for sharing this nice poem.10+

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Afzal Shauq 12 June 2009

thanks dear friend for that much concerns and love being a good friend...you respect my peace willing thoughts... thanks a lot and respect your pasion for peace....

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