I Give My .... To You! Poem by Sajna Kailas

I Give My .... To You!

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I Give my life to you,
you Give your love to me!
I Give my breathe to you,
you take them, live for long!

I Give my words to you,
you sing your song for me!
I Give my octaves to you,
you play the tune of love!

I Give my dreams to you,
you make your world a splendid!
I Give my secrets to you,
you keep it as an asset!

I Give my all to you,
you Give at least your love!
I Give my promise to you,
you make it, as a bond of love! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 30 November 2011

Its beautiful, especially the lines I Give my promise to you, you make it, as a bond of love! ! Loved it :)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 November 2011

Wow! beautiful poem, , , lovely poem indeed...

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Vipins Puthooran 01 November 2011

Passionate write/excellent poem! ! ! !

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Theany Ouy 29 October 2011

Short, sweet and simple... Nicely put. Thank you for sharing.

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Shaikh Haneef 06 October 2011

very good pem with a good eplanation for love compromises.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 29 July 2012

Very beautiful thought, wishing you true happiness for all the life.

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Khalil Salik 26 February 2012

Beautiful, my dear.your future is waiting for u.

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

This's excellent I gave my love to you You gave despair to me.....10****** Rose))))))

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(De Va) 05 January 2012

This is a very good write. such passion comes to your heart and out of your fingertips as you give the world a view of your soul...smiles n blessings

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Jose Lu 03 December 2011

I give my secrets to you you keep it as an asset hmm, you just know... like this.

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