Please spare me your secrets
I am not your best friend
(atleast not yet! !)
‘N I am sorry to break this to you
But …
I am not sure if I would ever be
Not that I don’t like you
But…
You are not my type
Or the other way around
So save your secrets to yourself
I don’t want to hear any, not even a bit
It disturbs me and haunts me
It also ruins my day each and every minute
I know someday you will read this
And hate me like some kind of disease
‘N instead of telling my secrets
I write them down in form of poems
‘N guess what? ? ?
I gain PEACE
‘N I got nothing to lose
So keep your secrets to yourself
No matter whose! ! !
March 15,2006
For those who feel the SaMe WaY
Nice poem gal. Do you know some secrets could change your life forever? Scaaaaaay :) . Peace.
Hey, great poem, I totally feel the same way about that stuff. Keep up the good work. : -) From Marissa.
a grand declaration of self and the space self needs to survive but perhaps there are no secrets every face open a fine poem
wow.! this one beautiful, lovely poem that i can relate to very well. keep up! lov, jojo
I'm not sure it is unique Koni, I'm not sure it's where I stand either! I think there some things I'd rather not know but I guess you can't be that picky if a friend wants to confide in you! Suppose it depends on their motives for telling you! ? Anyway great poem! Moyaxx
Hi, I finally got round to reading this, sorry. And as much as I like the language and the style, I can't say I like the point it makes. It does come across as quite sharp and callous in parts, not very warming at all. I admire it's bluntness to a point, but I like to feel people can tell me their secrets if they're my friend or not. I don't look on it as a bad thing. A unique standpoint you have, I think. Dan x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem.You painted a nice picture.I liked it. Good flow and deep emotions.Very sweet and touching. You go away from your beloved person but you love more than that. Valentin