I Know... I've Been There! Poem by Luz Hanaii

I Know... I've Been There!

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You stand in the shadow that was once my life,
those torturous years enduring the pain of something,
I did not know what?
Outwardly going through the motions
while inwardly wishing to just be done forever.

I didn't think I could ever escape the haunting darkness
which enveloped my soul
a very long and painful road.
But as I inwardly grew and struggled to move forward
the road along with my load became lighter and lighter
'til one day I realized that the shadows were far behind,
like some thick mysterious, ominous foe.

I see in you, the memory of those torturous years,
a suffering once accepted and perhaps embraced.
A pain that appeared out of my control, which
seemed to have no end.
For in sick despair, I found it easier to give-in and accept
that familiar pain, unaware of peace and love ahead.

Your present world is very real to you,
sadness, hopelessness, shadows and fears...
for no amount of light can illuminate your soul
my words of comfort may sound like foreign fairy tales
making you feel that no one can understand.
But I tell you, 'I understand, for I've been there! '

Let the seed of hope germinate within your heart
that light may illuminate and dissipate all fear and hate
Forgive, Forget, Repent, Move-on...
and one day you too may say,
'I know... I've been there! '

Thursday, January 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 20 May 2019

How beautiful, true and kind I feel your entire poem, thank you so much, these words keeps singing louder to me: " the road along with my load became lighter and lighter 'til one day I realized that the shadows were far behind, like some thick mysterious, ominous foe." I guess suffering and pain may help us find a special key that opens the door of unconditional love and happiness..

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Luz Hanaii 20 May 2019

Thank you for your comment. Going through refining fire, a painful lesson, makes one appreciate life more.

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Lyn Paul 11 February 2019

Words of strength and great healing. Hope you are catching up for lost time of a fulfilling life.

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Luz Hanaii 12 February 2019

Lyn, Thank you, yes I'm enjoying peace. The lessons is life make us strong and able to appreciate every good thing.

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Luz Hanaii 12 February 2019

Lyn Paul, Thank you for your comment. Yes, I'm at peace, every suffering brings valuable lessons. I'm enjoying the fruit of past lessons. In my view, to constantly complain or expect a perfect life sets us up for depression and disappointment.

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Connie Yost 11 March 2017

Your advise, so passionately given, leaves no room for doubt, you've been there! Outstandingly beautiful! !

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Luz Hanaii 12 March 2017

Connie thanks! I went to read your poems but they are gone?

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