I laid my heart bare
At starry strings there,
Unmoved blank that stare.
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Haiku | 02.04.13 |
A beautiful thought that gives insight. Very perceptive and great imagery. I concur with the Poet's Notes. But how about a falling star?
Thank you for the feedback, Rose. But how about a falling star? (Report) ... I am not sure what you mean. And the falling star or the shooting ones as we call, are no stars. They're only small asteroids which get pulled by Earth's gravitation and are destroyed before reaching the surface. But yes, a poet can call them a star, he/she has all sorts of licence. I'm sure you've some new angle to it that I can't see.
Excellent Haiku. It touched my heart, so well said in such brevity. Thought provoking in its being, this haiku. Your poet notes has contributed to my understanding this excellent Haiku. God's Blessings. A 10 Full Score
Goofed up, .. not preventing, but rather directing/inducing the reader to think in one direction...
Thanks, your feedback is very elating. I always wonder if I should add port's notes, but then add them still. The poet's interpretation is one, the reader can still have a different one. Often by giving such notes the poet might be unwittingly preventing the reader to think only in one direction. Is it fair? You are a discerning poet, I'd love to have your feedback.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant haiku with nice ideology. It is good to have the Poet's Note below which helps to understand the theme of the poem. Nice work.
Thank you dear KM. I take now a deep breath for being on the same page as I on giving Poet's Notes..