I Love You Are Words Poem by Dom Hunt

I Love You Are Words

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I love you are  words
Thrown about to please me
But they are empty 
Like leaves from a tree

Actions are all that matter
But I didn't see through the fog
Of the fantasy I had built
I have been petted like a dog

All things that I thought
Were walls I had built
Around the garden of my soul
You felt no guilt

I was played along
So I would be nice till the end
Didn't have to do that
Your love was  pretend

I made excuses for you
All the times I was tested
Couldn't shake me though 
I had too much invested

At the very end I still believed
That you loved me more
But I was a fool to listen to hope
As I always have before

Now that your gone 
And we will never be one
Can't help feel foolish
Not seeing were done

Monday, July 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Dillon 07 September 2012

Another great poem, read, felt and understood.

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Karen Sinclair 13 July 2012

Love is like the word snow... so in descriptive and thrown around as confetti, give me words such as adore cherish...words the like, i understand but love....what on earth is that, unless i do get that and use it for my children and sunny days...tyvm karen... A sad write of loss and confusion, i understand so well

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