"I'm A Woman" Poem by BHAVIKA DUDHANI

"I'm A Woman"

Rating: 5.0


I am a woman, Smitchly broken;
Quirky brains but always well-spoken
On a tilted surface, I lay my sufferings
Deceived by leeches to exits I cling.

I am a woman, Clenched by melancholy;
Keeping everybody, dancing at my feet wholly
A tree of responsibilities held up against my wall
I tremble over stones they want me to fall.

I am a woman, I'm plagued red each month;
I'm crippled with anxiety and hard as camel's hump
I confront death to give birth
All the torment in the process I lurk.

I'm a woman, Water doesn't quench my thirst;
I crave for tenderness and respect to be served
Not just a piece of meat; I'm a voice, a mind, a soul, a bizarre
I'm ecstatic to be a woman with smoke and cigar.

-B writes

"I'm A Woman"
Tuesday, October 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: woman,womanhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2020

A rare creation dear..dear poetess...you have a long way too go..You make me remember poetess Maya in these fiery lines..you are soft yet so pin pointed in your approach. Loved these lines so much.. Not just a piece of meat; I'm a voice, a mind, a soul, a bizarre I'm ecstatic to be a woman with smoke and cigar. All 5 Stars to the creative effort..To my favourites..

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Prabir Gayen 19 October 2020

Fine write......10+++///))

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 October 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Bhavika. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Sachidananda Panda 12 October 2020

" I'm a woman, Water doesn't quench my thirst; I crave for tenderness and respect to be served Not just a piece of meat; I'm a voice, a mind, a soul, a bizarre I'm ecstatic to be a woman with smoke and cigar." Marvellous Bhavika.. loved it... keep it up..

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Paul T P Burne 12 October 2020

Very enjoyable so i think you are a proud woman

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