Benjamin Paa Willie

Rookie (Sunyani, Ghana.)

I'M Immortal - Poem by Benjamin Paa Willie

I am immortal
A demented
Guilt-free child
I am immortal
And incompatible
So far
While turned
From a hand to another
She fell in
A conversation
With a fellow
And spoke fondly
Of Einstein
And other immortals
Demented child
Cursed to utter
The fellow
She took
The way towards
The immortals
I am going
To the library
A demented
Guilt-free child
There is a show
At the cinema
Laughing is good
For your health
The fellow
Ah, you can
Go back to
There is a lot of
There too
A demented
Guilt-free child

Comments about I'M Immortal by Benjamin Paa Willie

  • Bernard Snyder (12/3/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    Very interesting poem, brother! I like it a lot! Thanks for sharing. Also 'congrats! (Report) Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (12/3/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    I am immortal A demented Guilt-free child nice poem and congrats (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 12:33:00 AM)

    To those who didn't get the point of this poem; the child I was talking about is 'A Good Book'. Just imagine any good book. it becomes immortalised like the message of the book. The Authors too, many times. An example is the Bible. If you didn't get what I said it means I am not good at conveying my message and I try to improve upon that. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Ralph The Elf (11/1/2011 3:48:00 PM)

    i like it
    but i just don't get the immortality
    anyway you are artistic
    i like puzzling poems
    (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2011 11:27:00 AM), nice poem, very well (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2011 1:41:00 PM)

    Great poem again. Really like this one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 28, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 29, 2011

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