I'm No Poet Nor Lover Poem by valentin savin

But looking at the Milky Way I mumbled somewhat fast: -We'll perish under it one day. killing the enthusiasm....... you are a poet. and a lover.. just opposite to what you wrote at the end. tony

That early spring we stood at night - Just only you and I. We talked and kissed in the moonlight, The stars were shining high. lovely emotions expressed in an endearing way dear poet. thank u. tony

(cont.) ....But caught with the side of my eye -...i think i'd use And caught... i am no (great) lover, except of MYSELF! but i DO fancy myself (as i struggle against my straitjacket) to be a GREAT poet! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

That early spring we stood out night - ...i suggest at night or one night That died your enthusiasm and fervor. ........maybe killed for died? your third stanza is like a Rothschild (aka Fabergé) egg: FABULOUS! ! but, let's face it: you 'BLEW IT in the romance competition! ! ! ! ; ( (cont.) ..