Lost Love Poem by valentin savin

Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


Lost love
Whether I loved you or not
Alas, I cannot say anything,
As I never really thought;
But you've gone and I am suffering.

I am nearly choking in tears.
My life turned sad and unreal.
And this has gone on for years.
But you're still in my memory.

You may be happy, who knows,
Or grieving like me alone;
I must bear with it, I suppose.
And drink the bitterness of my own.

If you hear, answer me, please:
Do you have any love to share?
I can't bear a life like this.
Spare me at least my gray hair.

Thursday, April 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Valentin S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Valentin Savin 27 May 2018

Thanks a lot Jazib for your visit and comment. I'm sure to come and read your poems. All the best to you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 February 2019

A heartfelt write beautifully crafted. Very touching lines that vividly depict longings of the heart.

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Valentin Savin 25 April 2019

Thank you very much, dear Rose Marie. Please excuse me for late reply. I am so sorry.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2019

I am nearly choking in tears. My life turned sad and unreal. And this has gone on for years. But you're still in my memory.... crying over...... you h ave the heart of a child........ thank u dear poet. i pray so that you may get a great love in your life. tony

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Valentin Savin 27 January 2019

Thanks, Tony. It’s very kind of you. I’m flattered. At my age I have to hope only for the love of God.

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Valentin Savin 25 June 2018

Thank you Lungelo! It's very nice of you to hear that.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 June 2018

Well articulated, such a fine piece of artwork...I vote 10

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Chandan Dey 22 June 2018

The pain hidden in lost love takes us to the deepest layer of Love. This is a very emotive poem. I am really moved reading this poem. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.+++10

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Valentin Savin 23 June 2018

Thank you, dear Chandon, for your nice comment.

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