Valentin Savin
About me self
I in the Soviet Union was born*
When people there knew not what's porn.
In school I was in grammar poor
An left it quite uncultured boor.
The Inglish was for me as hell
I sat and waited for the bell.
I learnet three bad words very well
My teachers often heard me yell.
In me school years I sport did done
An nobody could stop mi run.
I did done serve the ARMY too
But since then much of water flu.
I worked in the Russian Sports Committee
Situated in Moscow City.
With the sports teams and delegations
I visited countries and nations
At sixty I was off retired.
My chief of me got very tired.
An now with me gran kids I sit
And am happy an giv no sh+t.
The problem's when me darling kids
Ask me some fairy tale them reads.
But drawings helps me very much
Portray the contents them as such.
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* The Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR)
You have done a good job on the language. It must feel corrupted.
Am I right that you wrote in Poetfreak too? Thank you beforehand for responding, dear Valentin
Very impressive poem, true gorgeously written, I have enjoyed your BIO poem immensely, thank you for sharing!
1- Your response to comment by R. M. Smith: " (7/3/2018 4: 46: 00 AM) Thank you, Robert! Bri Brian inspired me and I tried not to fail him." Ah ha! I thought your poem sounded familiarly like me own: My Inglish Sucks - 2... [english Skills; Humor? ; Beware The Words! ; Short; Sequel To " My English Sucks.." ]] 9/28/2014 (cont.)
A fascinating poem. A wonderful life story. Enjoyed reading it. Cleverly written, Valentin.
Thanks, dear Rose Marie, for the lovely remarks on the poem. I am very happy to see that you have found the poem interesting.
Loved the way you have spilled your thoughts in a very interesting english. Nice to read. Enjoyed the style of your story telling.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Answer to Mr. Bri Edwards! ! ! In school I was in grammar poor An left it quite uncultured boor. The Inglish was for me as I sat and waited for the bell. quite sarcastic!
Thank you, Mahtab. Bri Edward inspired me and he is to be blaimed for that. I feel myself obliged to him.