About Me Self Poem by valentin savin

About Me Self

Rating: 5.0


Valentin Savin
About me self

I in the Soviet Union was born*
When people there knew not what's porn.
In school I was in grammar poor
An left it quite uncultured boor.
The Inglish was for me as hell
I sat and waited for the bell.
I learnet three bad words very well
My teachers often heard me yell.
In me school years I sport did done
An nobody could stop mi run.
I did done serve the ARMY too
But since then much of water flu.

I worked in the Russian Sports Committee
Situated in Moscow City.
With the sports teams and delegations
I visited countries and nations
At sixty I was off retired.
My chief of me got very tired.

An now with me gran kids I sit
And am happy an giv no sh+t.
The problem's when me darling kids
Ask me some fairy tale them reads.
But drawings helps me very much
Portray the contents them as such.
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* The Union of Soviet Socialist Republics (USSR)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bri Edwards of the PH inspired me with his poems in which he dwells on using incorrect grammar (Inglish Sucks)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2018

Answer to Mr. Bri Edwards! ! ! In school I was in grammar poor An left it quite uncultured boor. The Inglish was for me as I sat and waited for the bell. quite sarcastic!

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Valentin Savin 03 July 2018

Thank you, Mahtab. Bri Edward inspired me and he is to be blaimed for that. I feel myself obliged to him.

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Robert Murray Smith 02 July 2018

You have done a good job on the language. It must feel corrupted.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

Am I right that you wrote in Poetfreak too? Thank you beforehand for responding, dear Valentin

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

Very impressive poem, true gorgeously written, I have enjoyed your BIO poem immensely, thank you for sharing!

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2020

1- Your response to comment by R. M. Smith: " (7/3/2018 4: 46: 00 AM) Thank you, Robert! Bri Brian inspired me and I tried not to fail him." Ah ha! I thought your poem sounded familiarly like me own: My Inglish Sucks - 2... [english Skills; Humor? ; Beware The Words! ; Short; Sequel To " My English Sucks.." ]] 9/28/2014 (cont.)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2019

A fascinating poem. A wonderful life story. Enjoyed reading it. Cleverly written, Valentin.

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Valentin Savin 19 February 2019

Thanks, dear Rose Marie, for the lovely remarks on the poem. I am very happy to see that you have found the poem interesting.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 November 2018

Loved the way you have spilled your thoughts in a very interesting english. Nice to read. Enjoyed the style of your story telling.

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Valentin Savin 09 November 2018

Thank you very much for your nice comment.

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