Meriam Joseph

Freshman - 775 Points (30/08/1999 / Kottayam, Kerala, India)

I'm Thinking - Poem by Meriam Joseph

I'm thinking, I'm thinking,
That's why, I am really thinking,
There are many things in the world,
That still remains quite untold.

What made the Bermuda a strong gravitational device?
Is it haunted by aliens at night?
Are there any planets with life that die?
Or does the earth's core have a bacterium called coride inside?

Will the earth be ruled by someone else at a time?
Are there aliens' alive outside?
What really happens deep inside the sea?
Are there more new species?

If God made us then who made God?
Can someone really eat a raw corn?
I really want to meddle with time,
But I think I'll be hugely fined.

Are there any wizards in this world?
Are all of them good and bold?
Do children control stories small and big?
Can a small caterpillar eat a big pick?

Can someone travel to the centre of the earth?
Can a human give a dinosaur birth?
Why are friends so friendly and live?
Guess, that's the type of questions I really like.

Can we repair the ozone layer's hole?
Are there any pirate treasure sunk under the ocean floor?
How different languages did come to the earth?
Can a rocket take us to the heavens over our head?
Well, Questions are really long.
That's always what's said

Questions and Questions,
They're all over our life,
There are lots of questions, more than a billion bytes,
Questions and questions, they'll never end.
Until the earth comes to a stop, that's the very end.

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Topic(s) of this poem: creativity, imagination, thoughts


Comments about I'm Thinking by Meriam Joseph

  • Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe)Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (7/2/2015 12:19:00 PM)

    Questions and questions, they’ll never end.
    Until the earth comes to a stop, that’s the very
    end. What a brainy insight!
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  • Sylva PortoianSylva Portoian (6/21/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    We think and think
    Till we get demented...
    Till our Astrocytes Dendrites ends dry
    And till we no longer can think and love...
    I wish you will never stop thinking...
    And sing forever your song of love...!

    Written Instantly...
    according to your thinking...!
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  • Molaire Jules (5/25/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    Wow! you have some interesting questions here!
    keep thinking!
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  • Stella Mary (12/30/2011 6:42:00 AM)

    You sure all full of questions. Keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/4/2011 6:40:00 AM)

    Very good, Meriam. Keep thinking and thinking.
    A person with lots and lots of questions, is the one who will eventually learn most.
    Nice poem
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  • Kaitreena Stwert (9/28/2011 7:16:00 AM)

    ya its very great to think and i wish that u will find your answers very soon (Report)Reply

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  • Ash Iyengar (9/26/2011 5:40:00 AM)

    hey, its truly superb..i liked it! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Louis CecileLouis Cecile (9/24/2011 2:42:00 AM)

    The very beauty of this poem is the last line...your thoughts create your work so keep thinking. (Report)Reply

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  • Robert RobertsRobert Roberts (9/21/2011 9:04:00 PM)

    i like you style, you're very optimistic and you know how to portray what you wanna say through you writing and to me thats the beginning of something great keep it up Meriam (Report)Reply

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  • Bonnie Lundgren (9/21/2011 6:21:00 PM)

    You need lots of work as a poet, but the premise of questions is a fascinating one. There are so many things to wonder about, and although many of these questions are immature or not well-put, I think you should keep writing and revising your work, because your curiousity will produce good work if you continue to pursue writing. (Report)Reply

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  • Cheryl Jacob (9/21/2011 12:47:00 AM)

    Nice one Meriam... reminds of me the times when I would get really fed up while studying and throw my hands in the air, and ask 'why' and 'what' out of exasperation! (Report)Reply

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  • Stefanie Fontker (9/20/2011 3:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful work, as always. Your skill improves with every poem you write. (Report)Reply

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  • Nanthinii MohanNanthinii Mohan (9/20/2011 7:11:00 AM)

    excellent work of art...well write! (Report)Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (9/20/2011 5:49:00 AM)

    A VERY INQUISITIVE POEM
    SHOWING HOW INNOCENT AND AT THE SAME TIME READY FOR THE WORLD YOU ARE
    NICE POEM.
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  • Renu KakkarRenu Kakkar (9/20/2011 5:17:00 AM)

    good work...takes me back to my childhood days when everything was questionable: 0keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (9/20/2011 5:12:00 AM)

    A really good poem i really liked. It.
    Good flow and good questions. Thanks
    For the invite.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, January 1, 2016


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