I Miss You! Poem by Naila Rais

I Miss You!

Rating: 4.2


I miss you from the depth of sea
Through the bottom of my soul
Without you I'm not real me
Sailing like a boat with no oar.

I miss you from the swirl of wind
Through the columns of my heart
One day you may find
Your name on my grave by thou art.

I miss you from the laughter of birds
Through the vibrations of my nerve
By your voice my enthusiasm always lurd
My grandpa! With patience I'll serve

I miss you from the oxygen of breeze
Through the shivering in my vein
The moment with you I'll freeze
Forever and ever till I sleep(forever) ...

Wednesday, October 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: grandfather
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Miss you grandpa...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2018

and this is true love poetry All newer lovers must read great NR

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Naila Rais 14 October 2018

Kkkk Thnx Naila

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 October 2018

Naila, such a lovely poem..........................

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

some how I am reading the poetry composed by u againand again and again I can't say why

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

you have changed your snap how will he come to you if he cann't recognize uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu NR

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Naila Rais 18 February 2019

Sir, what do you mean

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Thomas Kane 28 November 2018

Fantastic write! ! !

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Anne Velevski 14 October 2018

Nicely penned love it & thank you for liking my poetry.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2018

I miss you from the laughter of birds Through the vibrations of my nerve By your voice my enthusiasm always lurd My love! With patience I'll serve......beautiful images..... love, missing, yearning, desire, wishes., , , , , , , all expressed so well figuratively.. tony

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Naila Rais 14 October 2018

Thank you! ! ! Naila

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