Ship sails in her eyes
But there tsunami arise
The tides turned into waves
And waves turned into raves...
Tears started to reach
Towards tiny gravel of shiny beach
They shine like pearl on her face
As heavy as a million tonne pace...
Now ship has gone inside sand
Buried in an unknown land
Her dreams are broken into fragments
Miles apart her desires have went...
Let her rise and rise
Let her grow and grow
With the bond of love
Into the charming sough....
Let her ship meet harbour
Let her dreams touch the sky
With the fragrance of joy
Into the HEAVEN above.....
you manage to instill fearlessness in all women I help them so that must all now know they are second to none don't let men cow anyone down women are and have been goddesses JHANSI KI RANI -JOAN OF ARC- MARGARET THATCHER- INDIRA GANDHI- ALL women no!
YES RATED 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you for pointing out this lovely poem, upon reading it I was surprised by its similarities and intrigued by the mind that wrote it. :)
Impressive. A very strong writer you are. A strong woman. Thank you, you certainly will always rise... Of course well worthy of a 10, as 11 is not an option.
Her dreams are broken into fragments Miles apart her desires have went... let her ship meet the harbor and the mighty heavens. a very nice poem, very clear message. thank u. tony
The reading of this poem gave me a good, good feeling. I love the rhymes and the structure and also its wonderful meaning.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A really wonderful poem, a woman’s empowerment is her grace, charm and steadfastness in purpose...great write
Thank u... Soon will be reading urs..... Naila