I Need My Freedom Comments

All true phrases, all effective centralised simile structure...simple n beautiful! ! !

This poem is very touching and beautiful. Keep writing. :)

Freedom is as important as sunray to life.Nice comparison. I just loved your verse on freedom, we really need freedom for heart mind to be creative.

we all need freedom... in our mind and heart... in our life. we should be free from all faces of the world.... good poem..............

I like the way you describe and put your thought into this poem. It very wonderful and unique. Keep up the good work.10+

Superb piece! I liked it.