I Need My Freedom Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

I Need My Freedom

Rating: 5.0


I need my freedom
As much as I need my bread
I need my thoughts to roam free
Even long after I am dead

I need my freedom
As much as I need the sun's ray
I need my mind without a chain
I can't wait to be free for some other day

I need my freedom
Would like to be as free as a brook
I need it in every breath I take
Not off and on as if in a fluke

I'm born free
I need my mind and heart to share
I need every one to be free
Before into the dark hole I retire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 20 March 2012

Superb piece! I liked it.

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Shahzia Batool 03 June 2012

All true phrases, all effective centralised simile structure...simple n beautiful! ! !

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Celina Michelle Eisenhut 23 March 2012

This poem is very touching and beautiful. Keep writing. :)

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Rekha Mandagere 22 March 2012

Freedom is as important as sunray to life.Nice comparison. I just loved your verse on freedom, we really need freedom for heart mind to be creative.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 21 March 2012

we all need freedom... in our mind and heart... in our life. we should be free from all faces of the world.... good poem..............

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Christina Phan 20 March 2012

I like the way you describe and put your thought into this poem. It very wonderful and unique. Keep up the good work.10+

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