Thursday, April 16, 2009

****i Need You**** Comments

Rating: 2.7

if one day you feel like crying...
call me
i dont promise that
i will make you laugh,
...
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lil island Gal
COMMENTS
Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

You will be missed a lot blessings....

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Come fast to see me' Rachel Ann Butler

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

thoughtful and lovely expressions! .......10+

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Surayya Abbas 30 May 2009

What a lovely poem. I read it many times.Thanks for sharing.

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Akram Saqib 30 April 2009

good call for a beloved friend thanks for sharing

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William Stoneberger 28 April 2009

very nice, my dear...we could all use a friend like you...

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Carl Harris 22 April 2009

This is a charming poem, lil Gal, and it was a pleasure to read. It was nicely phrased and made good sense. Your use of the English language was very good except for the word 'quiet' which you spelled incorrectly as 'quite, ' another word with a different meaning entirely. It did not, however, affect the flow of your interesting poem. Carl.

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 April 2009

if one day you dont want to listen... to anyone.. call me i promise to be there for you and i promise to be very quite .........................I doubt this part of your promise :))) 10

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everyone can count on you marry....especially to write a great poem like this! ! :) you're just awesome that way... thanks, i love this poem +10

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Barry A. Lanier 18 April 2009

The passion of being compassionate and empathy jumps from the pages of this wonderful penning...reminding me of what agappe love is really all about...the poetess pen exposing her character.....Bravo

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Nangula Immanuel 18 April 2009

WOW! i love this poem! ! i know what you mean, i can relate. Sometimes you are always the one helping that people forget that you need help too. i felt like that when i wrote ' friendless friend'. perhaps you can read it. would be nice. N.N.

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Eyan Desir 16 April 2009

Aww, I liked your poem I Liked your flow Thanks you everything Sorry, I cant help you I wish I could Thank you for the poems You shared With Us Eyan

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 April 2009

A very emotional poem...................full of wise words.....................the poem dripping with love, wisdom, affection, care, and need to surreder to beloved...............can come from ur pen only......................good write.................

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