if one day you feel like crying...
call me
i dont promise that
i will make you laugh,
...
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very nice, my dear...we could all use a friend like you...
This is a charming poem, lil Gal, and it was a pleasure to read. It was nicely phrased and made good sense. Your use of the English language was very good except for the word 'quiet' which you spelled incorrectly as 'quite, ' another word with a different meaning entirely. It did not, however, affect the flow of your interesting poem. Carl.
if one day you dont want to listen... to anyone.. call me i promise to be there for you and i promise to be very quite .........................I doubt this part of your promise :))) 10
everyone can count on you marry....especially to write a great poem like this! ! :) you're just awesome that way... thanks, i love this poem +10
The passion of being compassionate and empathy jumps from the pages of this wonderful penning...reminding me of what agappe love is really all about...the poetess pen exposing her character.....Bravo
WOW! i love this poem! ! i know what you mean, i can relate. Sometimes you are always the one helping that people forget that you need help too. i felt like that when i wrote ' friendless friend'. perhaps you can read it. would be nice. N.N.
Aww, I liked your poem I Liked your flow Thanks you everything Sorry, I cant help you I wish I could Thank you for the poems You shared With Us Eyan
A very emotional poem...................full of wise words.....................the poem dripping with love, wisdom, affection, care, and need to surreder to beloved...............can come from ur pen only......................good write.................
You will be missed a lot blessings....