I Quit Poem by jenie hart

I Quit

Rating: 3.0


love for me
you had that love

love me with that love
always

i am dying to get that love
and a lovely love

never hide that love
from me

my life is what your love
my love too small

remember me friends
I Quit

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my last wish
i want 50 comments on this poem
help me anyways
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2013

Nice words of love, but what happened at the end? Why quit? Quit from where?

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Patricia Grantham 22 July 2013

Don't give up on love girl. Keep on stepping over the stones. Quitting is a means of escape. Keep going! Nice write.

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2013

jenie, ok, there, i've left two comments already. yes, they are quite similar. if you quit, what will you do next? ? waiting for the answer. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2013

jenie, let US have progress reports, girl. i follow the whole poem EXCEPT the lines: my life is what your love my love too small.....................is that what you meant to write. send me a message please. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2013

jenie, let US have progress reports, girl. i follow the whole poem EXCEPT the lines: my life is what your love my love too small.....................is that what you meant to write. send me a message please. bri :)

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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

never give up Jenie. love is just around the corner

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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

a new love is always just around the corner. never gie up on it good write

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