I Really Want To Poem by Lee Xiao hong

I Really Want To

Rating: 4.7


I really want to do something for you,
Because, I feel that I owe you so much
as if you are the branch, fall of fruit.
covering me, a tired trekker.

I really want to return to you warmth,
but I 'm not the sun,
I want to return you raining,
but I 'm not that cloud.

I wish to end the dream,
but I couldn't
that is not only pity,
but also bitterness.

Thursday, January 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 13 February 2015

Simple and beautiful.I like your style.

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Li Sharry 12 April 2015

Thank you for your good comments!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 January 2015

A beautiful poem based on wishful thinking.I enjoyed it Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2017

DReaming for the love. dreaming and dreaming and relating it to the cloud, sun, light, sky. beautiful poem. tony

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Shahin Latif 09 December 2015

Good ink! I enjoyed to read it. Heartiest thanks. Be well always.

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Li Sharry 12 April 2015

Thank you for your good comments

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2015

I enjoyed this poem and its elegance. Thank you

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Li Sharry 12 April 2015

Thank you for your good comment!

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Geoffrey Fafard 01 March 2015

just simply- straight from the heart to the pen. Strong simplicity I just love it so much. Thank you Sharry Lee good good poem.

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Li Sharry 16 April 2015

Thank you very much!

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