Listen To Me Poem by Lee Xiao hong

Listen To Me

Rating: 5.0


Why are you so shy?
Maybe
you long for spring,
but you are afraid,
The wind of spring
brings sand with its coming.


Why are you so warried?
Maybe
you are used to spring
you are afraid, one day
The spring will float away like a cloud


Oh, my friend, listen to me,
to what I say;
open you eyes wide.
Let us hold the firebrand

Thursday, November 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
for some thinking of dayly life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2018

Oh, my friend, listen to me, to what I say; open you eyes wide. Let us hold the firebrand.love is challenging....... when two who love hold the firebrand then you have achieved together.. thank u for this good love poem. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2015

Sort of philosophical write.Liked it.

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Paul Sebastian 16 April 2015

Great imaginations of what spring would bring with it and the fear of that spring leaving. Let us hold the firebrand. You may want to correct some typographical mistakes. Keep it up, Lee.

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Li Sharry 16 April 2015

yes, you ar eright. eys, should be: eyes! thank you!

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Kelly Kurt 11 April 2015

Beautiful thoughts, Sharry. Thanks for sharing

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Bri Edwards 15 December 2014

a couple of misspellings, but interesting. the firebrand is? welcome to PH. bri :)

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