Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 219 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

I Remember - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

When I looked into your eyes,
I knew it was true-
My heart never lies-
I was in love with you.

As you stood there
Just looking around
My whole body melted
into the ground.

I remember the day,
I remember the time,
I remember the place,
It is always on my mind.

You looked so good
In your shirt and jeans.
I remember that night
You were in my dreams.

I wished I could be with you
day after day,
Because I love you more
than words can ever say.


Comments about I Remember by Mahfooz Ali

  • (2/23/2007 5:47:00 AM)

    This is all wonderful! An excellent tribute to your wife! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/23/2007 12:40:00 AM)

    very nice, love second stanza.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011


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