Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 744,075 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Said So - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I said so

Saturday, April 21,2018
10: 03 AM

I said so
The wind has to blow
Not with the severe onslaught
But with gentleness and not being caught

People must feel your presence
And express sadly your absence
But what if, you rank sack the house
And uproot the trees

The country passed through turmoil
In some of the states, the appeal has gone unheeded
The work onwomen's status and improvement
I say with regret" we have wracked" at present

It is wewho have become selective
Practically do nothing and be subjective
Women had been the source of inspiration
And the whole of the nation s proud of such tradition

Some of the states have given an open hand
For such tendencies and given room
They are given political place and bearth
And as such criminals have an easy breath

Women are not sin
But their position is not seen
In true perspective with enough of deterrence
But at present, the whole of the nation feels tense

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2018 3:32:00 AM)

    Women are not sin
    But their position is not seen
    In true perspective with enough of deterrence
    But at present, the whole of the nation feels tense
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2018 3:32:00 AM)

    Thanks Hasmukh sir for suggesting remedial action through your poem. (Report)Reply

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