I Saw The Past Poem by Barry Middleton

I Saw The Past

Rating: 5.0


from the high point of the hill
in the shadow of a ruined house
I saw with the eyes of the Cherokee
I saw only the past

I saw the land of my fathers
I saw the misted horizon's wisdom
and I heard the sounds of the past
cannon fire and winds of despair

I wondered at the white man's war
I knew the black man was in chains
the blue soldiers would free him
but death was in the air

I must retreat deeper into the hills
I leave the river of blood
I will wait for peace to come again
I seek the clear water spring

I am only dreaming of the past
below me is the dark river
I see the misted horizon's wisdom
I must return to home once more

I Saw The Past
Monday, August 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,history,home,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 01 August 2016

History in poetical sensitive terms.The pain it does not teach us obvious!

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Barry Middleton 01 August 2016

Walking the hills of home I often though about the Civil War. I could see the Yazoo River where skirmishes occurred. There were arrowheads and charcoal beds where the Native Americans had made fires. I could not but help wonder what they thought of their new neighbors.

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Spock The Vegan 01 August 2016

Certainly a better poem than most on this site. A 10

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Barry Middleton 01 August 2016

Thank you Spock. It's nice to be appreciated.

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Barry Middleton 01 August 2016

Thanks Spock. I do not read many here. It is nice to have a few readers who appreciate my work.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 August 2016

Another wonderfully written poem from your mighty pen. I truly admire how you put a lot into a single poem with brevity and depth. A significant write with political undertones.10

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Barry Middleton 01 August 2016

praise.....................................

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Barry Middleton 01 August 2016

Thank you Nosheen. Your praire is gratifying.

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