I See Our Love Sailing ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I See Our Love Sailing ~

Rating: 5.0


In the soft silver moonlight,
When the paper boat merrily drifts,
Sitting under the pine tree,
I see our love sailing.

Tuesday, April 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan Trajan Renganathan 27 April 2021

Do you wish it to sail forever or would like to see it reaching shore...Well i won't suggest for drowning.

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Suzon Albert 27 April 2021

Yeah sailing thru the turbulence of this life's river..Full stars

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Zoyza Da Vinka 27 April 2021

Lovely poem.

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Mamta S 27 April 2021

Lucky to watch love sailing..

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Zumas Millamo 29 April 2021

Sitting under the pine tree, I see our love sailing. wow

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Anjandev Roy 10 May 2021

Sublime piece......like it....thank u..

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Darren Jkoeryo 02 May 2021

Wonderful..............DJ liked it.

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Ricky Magnathen 01 May 2021

Boat and life r the same and have same fate.

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Kostas Lagos 29 April 2021

I love the paper boat reference! Perfect!

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Deepak S S 29 April 2021

Niche...

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