I Shot An Arrow In The Air Poem by Shaun Cronick

I Shot An Arrow In The Air

Rating: 5.0


I shot an arrow in the air,
It fell to earth I know not where.
But with harsh critic's everywhere.
One must be impaled as if I care.

Thursday, May 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 18 May 2020

If this arrow is the arrow of love, it may strike someone on the ground, definitely it makes her happy, choose carefully, , but if the arrow is for a bird or a target in the sky that I am sure you will hit it because your view is very accurate. it is a great idea for a poem well done.10/10

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Shaun Cronick 18 May 2020

Hello Soran my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope all is well with you and those around you. And I'm no William Tell or Robin Hood of poetry I do miss disastrously most times. Thank you for sparing your time to read and so kindly appraise this small satire. And I will make time tomorrow and read and comment on your new poems and take care my friend.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2020

Shooting an arrow in the air... your imagination is fantastic and the thoughts derived from the shooting. thank you dear poet. tony

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Shaun Cronick 18 May 2020

Thank you good Tony for your most generous and again most kind, generous comment sir. I'm glad a great reliable poet as yourself enjoyed this small satire. I thank you again Tony and may God Bless and Keep you and all the loved ones around you sir.

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