I shot an arrow in the air,
It fell to earth I know not where.
But with harsh critic's everywhere.
One must be impaled as if I care.
Shooting an arrow in the air... your imagination is fantastic and the thoughts derived from the shooting. thank you dear poet. tony
Thank you good Tony for your most generous and again most kind, generous comment sir. I'm glad a great reliable poet as yourself enjoyed this small satire. I thank you again Tony and may God Bless and Keep you and all the loved ones around you sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If this arrow is the arrow of love, it may strike someone on the ground, definitely it makes her happy, choose carefully, , but if the arrow is for a bird or a target in the sky that I am sure you will hit it because your view is very accurate. it is a great idea for a poem well done.10/10
Hello Soran my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope all is well with you and those around you. And I'm no William Tell or Robin Hood of poetry I do miss disastrously most times. Thank you for sparing your time to read and so kindly appraise this small satire. And I will make time tomorrow and read and comment on your new poems and take care my friend.