I Spoke To Liberty Poem by Rani Turton

I Spoke To Liberty

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I spoke to liberty and liberty spoke to me
Asking softly, 'Do you really want to be free? '

I murmured to melancholy and melancholy said
' Why do all these thoughts go through your head? '

I asked for grace and grace touched my life
Saying, 'Quiet for now. Forget all your strife.'

Then I walked on alone. Touched to the bone.
The anger and the pain, washed by the rain
Dissolved as I wept.

Then, fortunately I slept.

I spoke to liberty and liberty spoke to me
Asking softly, 'Do you really want to be free? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Js Black 16 September 2009

Conversations we should all have at one time or another. Excelent job, and keep up the good work...Jeff.

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 August 2009

what a lovely poem ma'm...simple and elegant...very meaningful...10+

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

liberty and freedom a very big topic...write more on this start...simple and lovely

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Yelena M. 25 August 2009

A thoughtful and profound work of yours, so much is said here on freedom and deliverance, thanks for sharing, Rani.. Yelena M.

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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2009

Rani, lovely couplets written well used questions, most have asked before you. Liberty of mind comes when we live only now in present moment, it works no matter what the circumstance. thank you Warm regards Bob Blackwell

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