I Still Remember Poem by Little Sunshine

Moments so meaningful you've written into poem.. Nice write..

I find this poem beautiful because it communicates your true feelings in an honest way Your poems are lovely - true emotions are very valuable things. Keep writing!

well-done great poem with great feeling i like it

I on the other hand gave you a *10* because Poetic Expression is its own definition. When we endeavor to live by what others conceive or perceive that we should be, we cease to be ourselves and our ability to express ourselves in the manner which is like our skin becomes a straight jacket that someone else has restrained us with. Beautiful piece, write from your heart and all else will make sense of its own accord. Be Well, Nate

Very well done. I would have given it a 10, but I abhor the use of 'coz' instead of 'cause' or 'because', but that is just personal opinion =)