i just wanna know where are you
i am not afraid and i am not gonna be tired if i look for you in everywhere
but i am afraid if i don't find you in this world
I see so much of me in what you write. I'm not asking you to read my poetry but take the time to objectively read your own. When you rise above what you're writing about, you'll realize your own immeasurable worth and then all will be well. Keep smiling, Little Sunshine! Be Well, Nate
LoVe is an enigma you must seek it for lifetime even if you find it you must decode it... sooooooo DeeP is the LoVe...
I hope my criticize won't dishearten you rather it will inspire to improve your craft of writing. The in before everywhere is an excess. The emotions you expressed are impractical. And your quest for the perfect one for you will probably go in vain; this pessimistic approach to life is utterly negative. Try to revise your poems in order to offer the best possible output for the readers..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hmm, seems unfinished to me. Still a good base if you decide to expand this work.