.....I Surrender To Your Embrace Poem by Ken e Hall

.....I Surrender To Your Embrace

Rating: 5.0


Your loves essential oil overflows
A personified influence in the making
Of our love for the
Meaning of my being on earth
My very existence,
With your very existence
Which soothes my soul.

My pretty thing
You are my love song
That needs no words,
My symphony
Without a note,
I lay down my cloak
I am addicted

To your eternal embrace
I surrender

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 29 July 2009

lovely write ken.....

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

I am addicted To your eternal embrace wowww, what a write..I love this, Ken

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

'My pretty thing You are my love song That needs no words, My symphony Without a note, I lay down my cloak I am addicted To your eternal embrace I surrender' Hello sir.. this is very musical and lovely indeed.. I loved this one.. filled with emotions too.. best poetry comes when written from the core of ones heart.....10+++ with lots of love Shan

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Anjali Sinha 31 July 2009

your poem touches my core........ 'You are my love song That needs no words, ' lovely as always -10 anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 03 August 2009

beautiful love poem...............very romantic

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Ramesh Rai 28 July 2013

divine embracement. too much soothing. nice one sir with regards

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Beautiful soothing words that lends to the title...great job Ken...a 10

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Lady Grace 01 October 2009

the title alone can give comfort to readers...

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Patti Masterman 23 August 2009

Like the simple rhyme scheme and the controlled emotion that well out.

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Roman Petrov 08 August 2009

passionate! I like it...

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

England-Now Australian Citizen
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