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I Taste The Water - Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

I taste the water from the stream
That flows from mountains high,
I breathe the air so clear and pure
And gaze towards the sky,
I view the scenery beyond
Surrounding far and wide,
A place where I can find myself
And feelings deep inside.

Of love and all it has to give
For it's residing here,
I reach towards the golden sun
With nothing left to fear,
I watch the clouds all sailing by
Upon the winds that blow,
And wonder where they're heading to
What secrets they will show.

Yet here I know that freedom lives
Its voice is calling me,
As it now leads forever on
To sweet serenity,
I walk along the rocky path
That winds from mountains high,
As now the evening starts to fall
Within the amber sky.

Comments about I Taste The Water by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

  • (4/18/2008 9:59:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem Andrew, a scene serene, in it's splendor supreme! *10*
    Best regards, Friend Thad
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  • C.R. Clark (4/18/2008 9:43:00 PM)

    What a wonderful picture you paint, Andrew. I can almost taste the water and smell to fresh clean air. Thanks, I love it.
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  • (4/18/2008 3:12:00 PM)

    This is reminds me of our honey-moon holiday in Austria, we walked along the forest hillside and tasted the lemon fragrant water that collected in the wooden troughs
    Thankyou for such lovely memories

    Love duncan X
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  • (4/18/2008 2:26:00 PM)

    Nice poem very natural and sincere Nik (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 18, 2008

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